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How to Excel on the Bar Course Drafting Assessment

The structures, language and self-editing habits that separate a competent draft from a distinction-level one.

The Lexstery Team 22 Aug, 2024 7 min read
How to Excel on the Bar Course Drafting Assessment

Drafting is the assessment students most often underestimate. The marks are not awarded for elegance — they are awarded for clarity, structure and a quiet kind of precision that only comes from disciplined editing.

01Start with the architecture, not the words

Distinction-level drafts almost always begin with a one-page skeleton: parties, relief sought, causes of action, particulars in logical order. Build that scaffold before you reach for prose and your sentences will fall into place.

02The language of precision

Plain English wins. Replace 'in respect of' with 'about', 'utilise' with 'use', and trim every adjective that does not earn its keep. Examiners reward the draft that a busy judge could read once and understand.

  • One idea per sentence.
  • Active voice unless passive carries weight.
  • Numbered paragraphs to make cross-reference effortless.

03Self-edit in three passes

Pass one: structure. Pass two: legal accuracy. Pass three: language. Doing them in sequence prevents the most common error — fixing a clause while a deeper structural problem hides in plain sight.

If you cannot summarise your draft in one sentence, your structure is wrong.

Key Takeaways
  • 1Skeleton first, prose second.
  • 2Plain English beats Latin every time.
  • 3Edit in three separate passes.
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